By Joyce Jacobo
[Author’s Note: Hope you enjoy this trip into a peaceful landscape.]
Bring your readers into a story
(or so I have read among the lines
of various writers)
like someone who guides readers beyond a doorway
beyond which stretches another world
filled with unknown sights
sounds
smells
and sensations
Become their eyes
ears
noses
and sense of touch
Such as to have a tall oaken door
that materializes before them in the darkness
creak open to reveal such radiance beyond
they must squint and step back a step
even as a warm breeze
wafts its way inside
and gently brushes their cheeks
Anything might exist beyond that door
but here it will be a grassy hilltop
where blue skies
spotted by puffy white—
well, let us flick their colors to light pink
(this time
because it is our choice
to pursue realism
or fantasy)
Mountains in various shades of purple
line the horizon
on either side
of a widespread valley
where villages are visible
among dense forests
Also on the hilltop lays a turquoise blanket
with a picnic basket at its center
around which lay plates that hold cookies
of every description
Teddy bears sit arranged around the blanket who
all look up as the reader notices them
An old rugged bear
with wire-rimmed spectacles
and a red vest
motions for her or him
to take a seat
between a lavender bear
dressed as a ballerina
and an enormous black bear
dressed as a train conductor
….and every cookie the reader tastes
is as warm as if they were just pulled out
from an oven by her or his grandmother
and just as sweet
…where they can spend
many peaceful hours
What a wonderful description of what writers,poets do…You gently led us by the hand to unfolding scenes and worlds we were not even imagining..This is a meta look into the role of writer and those who tickle our fancy and our creativity. Well done Joyce..I really enjoyed this one all the way through…good to the last cookie crumb:):)
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Awww, thank you so much for the high praise, Karima. I’m thrilled that everything here flowed well, and that I was able to get across the happiness and enchantment felt when sharing crafted worlds with others. It means a lot. ^_^
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Beautifully written
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Thank you! ^_^
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Youre welcome
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Another amazing piece, Joyce.💕
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Ah, thanks. Glad you enjoyed it.
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I sure did 💕
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Yay.
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The magic of written art is that we can feast upon the writer’s magic world plus adding our own imagination.
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Agreed. I love that when we read, it really is a personalized experience for each reader, based on the associations they make related to what the writer has provided. It adds to the magic. Anyway, thank you! I’m thrilled you enjoyed it.
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^_^
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