By Joyce Jacobo
[Author’s Note: Based on an actual legend from near my hometown.]
Abandoned somewhere in the mountains
deep in Southern California or so legends say
exists a deep mine filled with gold
silver
and valuables left behind
by Gold Rush-era miners
for inexplicable
reasons…
However
there was an elderly prospector who
claimed to own a map to the mine
but was too feeble
to pursue the treasure
on his own—
whose reported deficiencies
mixed with greed
brought one soul
after another
to the door
of his humble shack
in the desert
to whom
he relinquished
with great reluctance
a copy of his prized map
(in exchange for
a small donation)
Each hopeful soul headed straight for the mountains
where they encountered the same figure—
of a tall skeleton that held a lantern
within its ribcage
and creaked wicked omens
as it reached for them like
(they must have thought)
an evil specter
or a monster
…which moaned but was too slow
to catch those spurred on
by avarice
Each soul would disappear into the mountains—
while the lantern light in the ribcage of the skeleton
would burn brighter and brighter
every night
as it turned an eyeless gaze to the moon
and howled a lament
to the heavens
The skeleton wanders the desert to this day
or so the legends claim—
alongside the questions
of why it still exists
and what or who
was the greatest curse
for those souls
lost without a trace
Absolutely wonderful , Joyce. Love the structure .💕
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Aww, thanks, Grace! I’m glad the structure flowed so well. ^_^
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It sure did 💕
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Awwww.
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What a folk tale, enjoy reading it.
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Yay! I’m glad you enjoyed it. Consequently, I also always remembering hearing one additional part of the legend–that only those “meek in spirit will enjoy the treasures of the mountain,” which I took to mean savoring their natural wonders, as opposed to looking for minerals or gems.
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🙌👍
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^_^
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