By Joyce Jacobo
[Author’s Note: More experimentation. ^_^]
A young poet decided
to conduct a literary experiment in which
she composed a horrible monster
within a poem
like a force of darkness
kept inside a worded cage
The poet granted him six sets of lavender eyes
on his face
with a thin crooked beak for a mouth
and a tall
willowy form
all the better to loom over victims—
though he would usually stand
in a hunched position
His tail was of a dragon
while his forepaws and hindlegs
were those of a rabbit
Then the poet gave him the ears of a fox
paired with the small wings of a bat
She considered the poem completed then
and stepped back to gaze upon her creation
from a safe writerly distance
until she noticed a tear roll down his cheek
“What is wrong?”
the poet asked
To which the monster replied
“I will be stuck in this poem forever
because it is what you intend for me”
“But you are a monster”
the poet reminded him
Then her creation shook his head
“You decided I was a monster
based on how I appeared
rather than anything I did
which has been nothing”
And when the poet took a moment
to review her work
she realized with dismay
that her creation was right
and he had done nothing
for which he should remain confined
within any kind of cage
In fact
the poet thought with dread
she was like a monster
or at least a mad scientist
who had locked up a thing
she did not fully understand
So the poet apologized to her creation
named him Gerald
then amended her poem
to open it up
and allow him
to fly free
away to parts only he would ever know
When I read to the midway of this piece, I was thinking ‘don’t let him deceive you. He is gonna get out of your poem and be a real monster.”
I enjoyed this creative writing very much. Thanks for creating.
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Awww, thank you! I’m glad you liked Gerald. Hehe.
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You are so creative, Joyce. Another wonderful and out of the box piece. Love it💕
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I didn’t see the twist coming. Well done! I love it.
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Aww, thank you! I’m glad you enjoyed that twist, and the story as a whole. ^_^
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I like this one!
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Wonderful! I’m glad you enjoyed it.
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I really did!
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Awww.
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